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minervasoloI wrote poetry. I didn't set out, but the first two lines make far better poetry than prose.
She follows with unfocused eyes
the lazy paths of dragonflies;
the mazy walk beneath the trees;
the hazy winding bumblebees
Capitalisation and punctuation a strange and deliberate choise. Call it avant-garde. The most difficult thing about poetry for me is stopping; I could add another couple of lines to this off the top of my head, and probably write another verse, but I think it would be a worse poem for it.
If I friended you recently and you don't know why, either I met you in London or you looked interesting!
She follows with unfocused eyes
the lazy paths of dragonflies;
the mazy walk beneath the trees;
the hazy winding bumblebees
Capitalisation and punctuation a strange and deliberate choise. Call it avant-garde. The most difficult thing about poetry for me is stopping; I could add another couple of lines to this off the top of my head, and probably write another verse, but I think it would be a worse poem for it.
If I friended you recently and you don't know why, either I met you in London or you looked interesting!
