random poetry post
10/2/04 08:15 pmInspired by
da_roz between English lessons:
Analytical Jam
Poetry is a lot like cake;
Both have many layers.
But unlike poetry, you can't make
Up layers that aren't there
In cake.
The rhythm's slightly off (really, it needs to be po'try instead of poetry in the third line) but I'm quite pleased with that.
Analytical Jam
Poetry is a lot like cake;
Both have many layers.
But unlike poetry, you can't make
Up layers that aren't there
In cake.
The rhythm's slightly off (really, it needs to be po'try instead of poetry in the third line) but I'm quite pleased with that.